The last two weeks we have been writing captivating holiday recounts with our teacher Ms Peters
Walt: write captivating holiday recounts.
Reflection: I enjoyed writing about what I done in the holidays. I think I should've added a little bit more and described it a little more.
Kia ora Tyrell my name is Aaron I am a year 6 student at Paihia School in Te Ngahere. I really loved your holiday recount I think that is very interesting and detailed. I think that I have done a recount like that. I really enjoyed reading your blog.
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Kia Ora Tyrell my name is Jade I am a year 7 student from Paihia School. I really liked you blog post about captivating holiday recount because you made it really interesting and you made it sound like it is a true story. We are also writing a narrative my story is about a friend serial killer but we are learning to make it paint a picture in the reader's head. What would you do if you were in the story that you have written?
ReplyDeleteHello Tyrell my name is Mahana I am a year 7 student at Paihia School and I wanted to say that I really like your blog post about your Captivating Holiday recount. I liked how you made it interesting to read because you were describing other things that relate to the subject instead of just saying the smoke was on my tongue . The other thing I liked was how It remind me when I did something to do with my five senses.
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