Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
For The last two weeks, we have been writing stories about nature. We then made frames with leaves. Then we took a picture of ourselves acting out something that happened in the story. Here's mine.
Hello Tyrell my name is Aaron I am a year 6 student at Paihia School. I really liked your blog post about Nature's Giants because I like how you described what you did. We are doing something a little different to that but close we watched a video and we had to pick only one scene from the video. Then we had to write it down.
Kia Ora Tyrell, my name is Jorjah and I am a year 8 student that attends Paihia School. I like your blog post about nature's giants because it looks very creative I like that you added the leaves and your picture to your writing. I like writing creative stories as well. What would you like to write about if you have the chance to again?
Kia Ora Tyrell, my name is Jade and I am a year 7 studiton at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about Nature's giants because it was interesting for me to learn about something that I did not know anything about Nature’s giants. I also think your blog post was fantastic because it help me for when I had to make a animation for our forest QR codes. Do you know what the biggest tree in New Zealand is called?
Kia Ora my name is Lenox I am a year 6 student at Oturu school. I like how you described what you done and how long you've been doing the nature giants writing. I love the leaf frame and the colour of the leafs. Next time you could take a closer photo so i can read the story you wrote?.
Kia Ora my name is Nathan and i'm a year 6 that attends to Oturu school. I really enjoyed reading that story it was interesting the way you described about how long you have been doing this story maybe next time you should zoom in or get closer to the story so we can read it.
Hello Tyrell my name is Aaron I am a year 6 student at Paihia School. I really liked your blog post about Nature's Giants because I like how you described what you did. We are doing something a little different to that but close we watched a video and we had to pick only one scene from the video. Then we had to write it down.
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Kia Ora Tyrell, my name is Jorjah and I am a year 8 student that attends Paihia School.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about nature's giants because it looks very creative I like that you added the leaves and your picture to your writing. I like writing creative stories as well. What would you like to write about if you have the chance to again?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tyrell, my name is Jade and I am a year 7 studiton at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about Nature's giants because it was interesting for me to learn about something that I did not know anything about Nature’s giants. I also think your blog post was fantastic because it help me for when I had to make a animation for our forest QR codes. Do you know what the biggest tree in New Zealand is called?
Kia Ora my name is Lenox I am a year 6 student at Oturu school. I like how you described what you done and how long you've been doing the nature giants writing. I love the leaf frame and the colour of the leafs. Next time you could take a closer photo so i can read the story you wrote?.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora my name is Nathan and i'm a year 6 that attends to Oturu school. I really enjoyed reading that story it was interesting the way you described about how long you have been doing this story maybe next time you should zoom in or get closer to the story so we can read it.
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