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Wednesday, June 16, 2021

The game

 Walt: Show doesn't tell.

For the past week, room 5 has been working on editing our narrative weighting. This is mine.

Reflection: It was nice writing stories about stuff but it was hard because we had to write it in a minute.

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Tyrell my name is Gail and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I enjoyed reading this post about “Show Not Tell” because I feel like the Narrative you wrote was interesting to read. This reminds me of when my class did something similar to this but we did what could it be poems which are poems that do not directly state what the author is describing.
    How did you get the idea for your Show Not Tell Narrative?

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  2. HI Tyrell, my name is Anika and I am 6 student at Paihia School. I really liked your post about the game because it was very interesting to read. Your post reminded me when my old class did this too but we did a kindness letter.

    Did you enjoy this work and posting about it?

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  3. Wow done and good job

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