WALT: write a truly captivating recount.
This week room 5 had to write out a captivating holiday recount by writing small paragraphs about what we did during the holidays.
Reflection: I think that I did well at mostly everything, but I could have spaced my stuff out more.
Kia ora Tyrell,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your holiday recount about your hunting trip and the way you used the five senses in your writing. Maybe next time you could work on spelling and proofreading. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.
Hi Tyrell I liked your blog post about “My Holiday Recount” because it had relatable pictures to your writing. The thing I also liked was what you said you could do next time. Your DLO looks so cool with the things you did on the holidays. I also saw lots of family and was playing on the trampoline with my cousins.
ReplyDeleteDid you have fun with all of these activities?